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書中:
...所使用的訊號,他只提過狼嚎三次。〔起新段落〕
訂正:
...所使用的動作,他只提過狼的叫聲三次,[不起新段落]
理由:
1. 狼的叫聲不只有狼嚎,還有其他叫聲
2. 文中這裡強調的是動作與聲音的對比性,只說是訊號太含糊,因為訊號也包括聲音訊號
3. 此處分段並不恰當。
原文:
By comparison he mentions vocalizations only three times. That doesn't mean that whines and growls aren't critically important in the social relationships of wolves….
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